The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
Nice job comparing life to a hotel or motel room...
Yeshua bless
09/19/05
You compared several things to motels: people, life, the world. I think if this were tightened up again, it would be a very nice little devotional for travelers.
09/21/05
You've made a really good start here. This is a delightful analogy, with realistic, believable descriptions. There are a few punctuation/grammar errors that interrupt the flow, but all in all, a great piece. Well done!
I can relate to this piece being one who LOVES to travel. Life's not always what it looks like, but there's that expected destination. Thank you, you really blessed me with this piece, and isn't that what it's all about?