The Official Writing Challenge
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Heartfelt and meaningful. Well done!
Very nicely done. I have no knowledge of how to critique a poem, but I can say this was a joy to read. I felt the emotion, your passion for this beloved book, which happens to be my favorite too.
A beautiful poem. I could easily feel how important the Bible is to you. Your rhyming pattern is different than some poems but your message comes across loud and clear
I liked your take on this topic. Good job. :)
You have a wonderful message here and you've used some great words in this heart-felt poem!
Beautiful poem! I like the part where you said "they only found Him guilty of love." That part is really cool. Oh, that everyone would become a reader of The Book!

P.S. Remember that in the Challenge entries, italics are made with <> instead of [] [/].

Great job, and very "on topic."
You have created a wonderful mind picture of The Book. Adding the word "Dusty" made your poem a very sad commentary about the condition of the world today. Good poem.
Your poem must have been good as it struck home. There's too much dust on my bible. Good job.