The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 575 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Great message with a great example. Be sure to double space paragraphs for easier reading :)
04/25/10
Some good messages wrapped into this. Bear especially likes the way you used the movie plot to illustrate various aspects of people's need for salvation and what slows people down from receiving Grace. One note: Best not to call your story by the Topic. You're allowed to (and even encouraged to) give it a separate title, to set it apart from the other entries.
04/26/10
This was an encouraging message for Christians who deal with guilt. I can picture you delivering it as a talk at a retreat. I like the illustration and your personal touch, but I think scripture would have strengthened it.
Very profound and powerful words. You make many excellent points in this.