The Official Writing Challenge
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Good use of scriptures, reinforcing the inspiration and mighty power of God's word.

Your take on this topic is similar to another article, also in Beginners (Superman) of which I agree with you on.

Remember to double space paragraphs for easier reading :)
This could easily be made into a great devotion. You did a good job explaining the scriptures. A small suggestion might be to take one example expound on it and show something that happened in your life that relates to the scripture.

But you did a great job describing the topic and your passion for the Word is obvious. Good job.
This devotional is thought out very well.

I'd recommend a stronger hook--using the topic for your opener might not bring in readers. Start with an anecdote with some oomph, perhaps, and they'll be more likely to stick around.

I appreciate the time and thought that you put into this.