The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow is right!! What a wonderful experience. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Great message...Love!
Your story caused me to imagine this world without any other interactions between one another, except for...patience and kindness. WOW!
What a stunning vision!

Be careful of commonly mistaken words: I caught lay/laid and scared/scarred in the first paragraph.

I love your title--it fits your piece perfectly.
Amen. I love that passage and have studied it alot myself. Love.
Congratulations on placing in the top 12 in your level!