The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/10
Great analogy between sneeky rocks in the sandals and sin in our life! Part of it reminded me of James 1:14-15 "But each one is tempted when he is carried away and enticed by his own lust. Then when lust has conceived, it gives birth to sin; and when sin is accomplished, it brings forth death."

Great message to weed the sin out of our life with the power of God's Word, before that sin overtakes us.
01/15/10
A very clear, well-written devotion. The image of the stone in the sandal is clever, one I will remember!
01/18/10
Excellent devotional--well-written and with an object lesson that everyone can relate to.

I've started a class in the FaithWriters forums for Beginner and Intermediate writers. I'd love to see you there--look for "Jan's Writing Basics".

This is outstanding writing--I'm so glad I read it this morning.