The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
That really would be a dilemma!

I wonder if this would have even more impact if you wrote it in a more narrative form--with your character actually interacting with members of his team, and attempting his difficult argument in a real debate. Just a thought.

Thanks for reminding us of so many beautiful, colorful things.
12/17/09
Good job and interesting take on the topic.