The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/09
A wonderful lesson.

I'd love to see this expanded--to see more dialog with the woman, and to see how the brown baby Jesus impacted her as the program played out. You're a good story-teller--tell us the rest of the story!

I really enjoyed this entry. I think you've got a great Christmas pageant story here that you could probably expand. It's an entertaining story with a great lesson. You write well - keep going!