The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
You did a nice job with both the story and the rhyme. I enjoyed it!


Nicely illustrated and written with grace. The Son shines is this one!

Blessings!
01/11/10
I like how you bring hope to the death of the character in the poem. For believers, death is merely leaving forever the pain and troubles of the world behind and entering into the blessed arms of Jesus! Great job on portraying the joy of being with Jesus forever! :)