The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Thank you for your yellow entry. You've spiced up my reading time. Very creative!
11/21/09
Interesting style of dialogue and narration. Your description is good. I can easily picture the bright and delicious tea table. Good work.
Nicely written and enjoyable read. Thank God for moms!
11/23/09
Now that is a supermom! All those kids, pregnant AND hot weather! Amazing! Cute story.