The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/09
Well done! I find myself wanting to tell my grandmother something, and then remember she's not here anymore. You captured that feeling well.
11/23/09
I loved the descrition "an over-emoting flop of a human" That so well sums it up how we often feel about ourselves.
11/25/09
Sadly, we all can relate to this story. You did a good job. Your story reads smoothly. Keep up the good work.