The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/09
Beautiful thoughts on our Lord. Blessings
11/01/09
What a lovely piece dedicated to our precious Lord Jesus - you show such love for him here - Love it!

Colin
11/01/09
I love the ryhthm of this poem. The first half of each line is slower and then the syllbles speed up toward each end. Also clever is the imperative to each line. Good work.