The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/09
Wonderful story. Good descriptions. Thank you for this piece.
A lovely story! So much going on here, I did like the end, though I think there were a few tense changes in here that made me a little confused as to the times the story was taking place. Be careful to keep an eye out when using past/present tense. Good job though! a nice, light read. ^_^