The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
Well measured until the last three stanzas, but still a good effort, full of meaning, voice, and prosody.
08/18/05
A well written poem -good descriptions of all the locations.
08/19/05
A nice trip. I enjoyed every moment of it!
08/19/05
Lovely work.
08/20/05
Charming poem, with smiles in every word! "Very Well Done"
Very well done. I enjoyed this immensely. Thanks for sharing.
Wow, Ann, a well-deserved placing on this one! Would LOVE to read more of your poetry. Encore! Encore!
03/23/06
I really like the last three stanzas. What a beautiful thought to share especially with those who have never had the opportunity to travel abroad. Best wishes.
07/05/07
A well deserved placing right out-of-the-gate! I am always sooo in awe of your writing gift with poetry!
You truly showed your talent from the very beginning. The last verse is worthy of Masters before you got there!
Wonderful poem on God's great wonderful world. All wrapped in a small fallen leaf.
07/05/07
Even way back then you were taking home the awards! Geesh! Just more evidence of your God-given talent, Ann. Personally, I loved this poem. A truly beautiful first entry. Nicely done.
Wow! This was awesome writing!
Goosebumps!
So awesome.
Even in beginners you were already a master in writing hon. Wow! Simply breathtakingly wondrous. Wonderful message! Whether story
or poetic verse
your gift is worth more
than what lies in a purse
it flows and ripples
from God's heart
to pen
where it transports beauty
to the hearts of men
thank you for sharing
God's thoughts with so many
they brighten our days like
a shiny new penny...