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Very well done! :)
This is a great story and being short I can relate to the frustrations it can cause. Thanks for the reminder of the spiritual realm which assists us more often than we think!
great story; well-paced and clear.
A lovely adaptation of a well-known Bible story. You were able to get into the mind of Zacchaeus and portray his thoughts and emotions well. A creative approach to the topic.
The way you started and finished with the phrase, 'There's a sight to see' was effective.

The glimpse into the spiritual world was great too ... I bet it was like that!