The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/09
A very touching story, and a great way to show spring.
08/01/09
Very sweet story. You connected the passing away and the new life very well.
08/02/09
What a beautiful story. I like the way you have connected Bob's passing to the baby's birth. Your descriptions are good and overall, I really enjoyed it.
08/02/09
Loved this, very sweet. Thank God for grandchildren and the hope He gives through them. Good writing.
08/06/09
Just splendid storytelling. Drew me in deep where it made me care about the characters. Look forward to reading more of your work.
Mona
08/06/09
An excellent story. Congrats on the win. :-)