The Official Writing Challenge
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Can't say I really understood the punchline, but all-in-all it's a powerful short piece. Great, image-forming descriptions!
Forgive me, but I am a little confused as to what your story has to do with the topic for the Writing Challenge. Your imagery is good, but I just have missed something in this story. Laura
Very good descriptions and so good material here but too many unanswered questions. Why was this teen eating her and with whom. Was it a first date? Some mystery can be good but there was room in the word count to expand this a little. Well done and keep writing!