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This is certainly an encouraging piece this week as many of the themes seem to be of dying and sadness. I liked this uplifting bit. Thanks for sharing it.
This was a nice article and I enjoyed reading it. Good for him; he found love in his "twilight years".
lovely sounds like a true story and i hope it is!
I liked the upbeat feel of this short read. I used to work in a church office and saw several members fall in love in their twilight years after being widowed. God does provide and look after us.
his is a great uplifting story. Short and to the point. If there's anything that detracts, it's the Christian jargon. Try to avoid cliche phrases and you could turn a good piece into a great one.