The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/09
Nice portrayal of how God encourages us. I like your MC's voice, but I felt like this was two stories and might have been stronger if you had told only one of them.
06/15/09
Life is not always a bowl of cherries but when we can see it through God's eyes, it does indeed have a half-full perspective. Good job.
06/15/09
I like this. It needs a little editting, but you have a gift. Keep it up.