The Official Writing Challenge
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This is pretty good! A creative way to touch on this story and the topic. I like the names like the "Sea of Creation" etc. Nice job.

Just a tip next time,

add a few spaces

between lines, to make for easier reading. ^_^
05/24/09
Good story. It would make a smoother read with spaces between paragraphs. All in all good job!