The Official Writing Challenge
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You have some good lines and a great idea here, I wished it had carried the same format throughout though, the long verse kind of tripped me up, because the rhyme felt a tad forced, but you did really well with the first two verses, nice job!
05/21/09
This is GREAT! It reminds me of Proverbs and the same "plea" for young men (young people) to trust and follow God even in the difficult young adult years. Excellent job!