The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/05
That was a very good entry! Very realistic, and kept my interest til the end. God bless ya, littlelight
08/04/05
VERY NICE. I think you could've left the first paragraph off. It could begin with "What doesn't ache", said 61 year old Harry while trying to recognize the man in the mirror. Just a possible way to tighten it up. Great article.
08/04/05
Nicely written - well done.
Very nice interpretation of the topic and some lovely little twists in the story. Well done.