The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent! I love the bolded phrases, and you've written both of your characters very well. Loved it.
Loved the way you portrayed your characters. Well written. I like happy endings so having Nina coming into a place of accepting her Savior is great. You've shown how pain can come knocking on our door no matter how successful or beautiful we may seem to be. Thank God he is there to receive us with open arms and accepts us if we come to Him. :0) Thx for writing this, I really enjoyed it!