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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: In and Out (04/30/09)
Past the imperfections that way heavily on my soul He presses in...

Deeper and deeper He draws me under His wing...

My soul utters longings for more of Him under a layer of insecurity holding me back...

I want more of Him. I want to KNOW Him; not just the way man can know God but I want to KNOW Him. I long to enter in the Holy of Holies, the inner most place of the secrets of God is where I want to be.

He breaks down the chambers of my heart like a hymen broken for the first time; Reluctant yet assured that my God loves me and He will never leave me. By His side is where I want to be.

In and out goes the presence of His love to me; a stream of joy overflowing and gushing into my Spirit which becomes one with His.

He bares into me and I embrace Him back. Sometimes pleasant and sometimes mundane but never our love the same...
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Jan Ackerson
05/09/09
Very lyrical and psalm-like.
Myrna Noyes
05/12/09
Your longing to enter the Holy of Holies, the sanctuary of God's presence within our hearts, is echoed by many of us on this earth.

Your first two lines especially spoke to me, about how God seeks a deep relationship with us despite our imperfections.
Kathy Gronau
05/14/09
Incredible!
What I have been feeling!