The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/09
I really like the idea of threads weaving in and out as a metaphor for healing--this was very clever.

You did mix your metaphors in a few places--by using "shattered", (which implies a hard material that couldn't be mended with thread), and then when you have the paragraph where tears become threads to do the mending.

I have known this mending in my own life, and I loved reading this.
I really like this. Your usage of weaving as God weaves our broken lives into something beautiful is well done! Thank you for writing this piece, beautiful!