The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/09
Very nice free verse, with an important message.
05/05/09
I especially liked the last verse about staying soft like clay. Beautiful message told simply.
05/06/09
Fresh and clear in its simplicity, with an appropriately gentle, caring voice. And unlike my own entry, no typos that I noticed!