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This is a lovely work that strongly evokes parts of Africa. Thank you.
03/13/09
I agree that it has a strong feeling of Africa to it. Lovely images and descriptions.
03/13/09
You have really done well at capturing the soul of Africa. I like your poetic language which, without needing to use rhyme, made the piece seem more like the song than the story of Africa.
03/13/09
Wow! Thanks for this. You protrayed this woman and said it exactly. That we can see her life just by looking at her. Just a thought but, im not sure in your last line what "it" is. Perhaps you could say. "Africa itself is her author".
03/18/09
You're a great writer. I just had to comment. Your words drew me to Africa. I could almost see her.
03/26/09
Hi Susan. Just a quick note to congratulate you on your 2nd Place win in the Africa Challenge, and also to let you know you made it into the Top 30 overall as well. "I Saw an African Woman" ranked 24th in the highest rankings. Well done!

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24825

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

If you haven't already moved up to Level 2, now's the time to do it. :-)

Congratulations again. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
08/13/09
Ilove this beautiful.