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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Africa (03/05/09)
AFRICA

A continent of about fifty two country and some island along is coast and the continent is hooked with the asian continent by the canal of suez from Egypt which was one of the powerfull country in Africa in the ancient times even till today a pyramids remind us of his ancient advanced technology .the African continent have a population of but one of the most populed country is Nigeria with 88.5 millions and there is as well different races we find black, coulored ,whites but africa is know as black continent because blacks are majority the continent is very attractive to tourism due to is tropical climate which is very warm and hot in some country as in the central Africa the continent is passed by an equatorial line and Africa is divide five part like west Africa, southern Africa, east Africa ,northern Africa and central Africa each part have many different languages and tribes northern Africa is a desertic place due to sahara desert and the southern Africa is mid-desertic due to Kalahari desert .today Africa is most affected with poverty,sickness and civil war but Africa is one of the very potential continent in the world by is resource in term of first row product (diamond, uranium, gold) but beside Africa have a beautifull vieuw in his wildlife and forestry.
Africa are were human market has take place in the Zanzibar where all the country could buy their slave and take them where ever they wished and many of the African part was discovered by Portuguese and Nederland’s than was colonised by france,Belgium ,united kingdom ,italy ,Portugal and all those colonial has enriched their own country because Africa was just like a working place .african today they are rejoicing about the coming world cup event in south Africa which is one one the country stricken with apartheid which is racism but still Africa have a very big political probleme because of the pride of what African think they know and those time the continent has lifted china economic by becoming is major consumer in cheap quality good.
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Sharon Kane
03/12/09
You have obviously done a lot of research, and you covered a lot of ground, from ancient Egypt to the modern day world cup!
Try to pay attention to spelling and punctuation. A good tip is to read your piece out loud and only take a breath when you are at a full stop. If you run out of breath the sentences need to be shorter :)
Thank you for highlighting what a vast and interesting continent Africa really is.
Lynn Jacky
03/12/09
You have done a lot of research, suggestions:use spacing between your paragraphs makes for easier reading and understanding by the reader. Also spelling and punctuaton. I did learn a lot - thanks.
Karlene Jacobsen 
03/14/09
This was really very informative; thank you for that.
Laury Hubrich
03/18/09
I can see this laid out like a travel brochure with pictures to go along with your descriptions. I like the research you put into it. It is very informative. Keep on practicing. That's the best way to learn - that and taking the advice of other FW.