The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem.
I read the peom and said to myself "this is a beautiful poem" then I went down to read other peoples comment and behold someone else had left the same comment. I love your style. Well done.
Well. I'm sorry but I have to use the same word.. *Beautiful* It really is.

Father in the last stanza needs to be capatalized as well as Lord throughout.

Thank you for sharing!
Lovely free verse with beautiful imagery.

There were some unnecessary commas here and there that interrupted the flow somewhat.

A strong entry--thanks for sharing it.
I can hear your heart sing out Hallelujah! Very uplifting tribute to the topic country.
I love the refrain of 'Hallelujah'! Beautiful work.
I sing hallelujah with your words in this inspiring poem.
Very nice entry. I enjoyed reading it.