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Topic: South America (02/05/09)
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TITLE: My Heart Sings, Hallelujah! | Previous Challenge Entry
By Lee Page
02/06/09 -
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
To the clashing of seas.
From Brazil’s enormous lakes.
To Peru’s mighty shore.
Proves to me, that you are.
My heart sings,
Hallelujah!
The mountain’s peak,
To the busy streets.
To the swaying trees,
God’s hand is there,
I cry out.
Hallelujah!
God put South America in her place.
Protects her from, the seas swift sway.
The mighty current doesn’t move her out of place.
To my lord I sing.
Hallelujah!
The hurricane’s wind,
And the tornadoes spin.
To the tsunami waves.
The strong winds of the day
I am glad my lord, keeps her still.
and The lord is thrilled To hear us say…
Hallelujah!
Missionaries come,
to proclaim.
Not through work,
Are we saved.
Through Christ a lone,
We are made whole
My soul sings,
Hallelujah!
Out of storms
and raging seas.
I get down on bended knee
And then I pray,
for the souls unsaved.
To my father I sing,
Hallelujah!
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Father in the last stanza needs to be capatalized as well as Lord throughout.
Thank you for sharing!
There were some unnecessary commas here and there that interrupted the flow somewhat.
A strong entry--thanks for sharing it.