The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
I appreciate very much your sweet spirit in this article, and the fact that you didn't emphasize the rightness of your "color", but the fact that we need to be working together. Yes!
01/16/09
This is a well though out, well written entry. One suggestion though and it's minor; perhaps an extra space between the paragraphs for easier reading.
I enjoyed reading this article very much. I have had similar thoughts, but I have never been able to articulate them very well. Nice job!