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Topic: The USA (01/08/09)
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TITLE: Our Country | Previous Challenge Entry
By REBECCA MACIAS-Flores
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It is to U S A land ,where liberties are free
Ones thoughts and opinions expressed so readily.
It is to U S A land ,of Rights, guaranteed so they say
Sometimes there’s fights ,When they are taken away.
It is to U S A land ,where we know our colors run true
Always remembering the Red White and Blue.
It is to U S A land , that is steady going to battle to defend
Military at the ready ,to fight for her honor to the end.
It is to U S A land ,where twilights last gleaming
There Our flag stands its stars and stripes streaming.
It is to U S A land, saluting our Navy, Marines, Army and all
Our country they will save ,for they have answered the call.
It is to U S A land, of the brave and home of the free
God Bless the USA how great our country.
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Be careful of your comma usage--some of yours were not necessary, and the space shoud come after the comma, not before.
It's apparent that you love your country, and I enjoyed this sweet poem.