The Official Writing Challenge
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This was refreshing--lots and lots of people don't have the "Christmas card" Christmas.

I was a bit confused about the cast of characters--didn't quite catch all the relationships. And you switched back and forth between past and present tense a few times.

I enjoyed reading this, as it showed evidence of a lovely spirit.
Mary, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 1, placing 13th for the level.

The competition is always quite intense in Level 1, so well done. Keep up the great writing.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)