The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/08
good job! :)

love the plot!
11/20/08
Very sweet....i like the name of the town.
11/24/08
This would make a nice children's book.

Be careful to be consistent with capitalization, and think about giving your story one more edit before submitting.

Your writing shows promise, and I hope to read more of your challenge entries.