The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, your story shows the mercy and grace of God so brilliantly! And it really gets across how each and every one of us is so important to the whole body! How just one unlit bulb can diminish the light..
Thank you for your courage and transparency! Because it's straight from your heart it touches the heart.
11/06/08
Well written, though a space between paragraphs may make it easier to read.
11/07/08
An interesting analogy. I was touched by your honesty. I agree it would have been clearer if it had been divided by paragraph. Nice work