The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title grabbed me, and your wonderful writing kept me glued to your story from first to last word. This was truly a joy to read. Well done!
Well written! I felt exhausted by all your efforts to follow Martha! I loved the references to the Bible put to one side. It describes the too-busy side of Christmas.
I had stop stop myself for a moment and ask "Am I reading a story in beginners?" This was very well written, and the voice of your MC is superb.

I loved the parallel of the modern day Martha to the one in the Bible. Keep on writing like this and you will be out of beginners fast. Thank you for sharing this! :)
Excellent, for all of the above reasons.