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10/24/08
"When you are in HIS kitchen, you do things HIS way!" was my favorite line! :-)
Reminded me very much of my grandfather, who's been with the Lord for many years now. I have one handwritten recipe from him, for Microwave Peanut Brittle, which he perfected himself. One day I turned it over and he'd written many of his special "hints" to me on the back.
Thanks for bringing back sweet memories for me, with this story!
This story was very touching and well done. It was just beautiful. Keep up the great work my FaithWriter friend.
10/26/08
I could alomost taste the cookies!
You made my mouth water with your descriptions at the beginning.

There were a few missing commas and other minor grammatical errors, but those are easy to fix, and they didn't detract from the story.

I think it's great that your grandfather's legacy lives on in you. Keep on baking his cookies, and keep on writing. :)
I love your mouth watering descriptions but even more so how you spoke of your grandfather's love for baking and his "exactness" in "his kitchen".:0) It brought tears to my eyes as you remembered of his directions and his praise "atta girl, atta girl". If this is a true story may you always keep your sweet memories of yoru grandpa in your heart and hang onto them for they are prescious. My grandpa didn't teach me to bake but he did teach me how to ride my bike when I was little and those memories will forever stay with me for he took the time to teach me and encourage me. Keep on writing and I look forward to seeing more of your submissions. God bless you!:0)