The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful story with a heartwarming ending.

There were some grammar errors such as missing commas and missle toe is actually spelled "mistletoe", but those are minor errors that are easily fixed, and they did not detract from this great story.

I'm not sure if this is a true story or a fictional story, but I enjoyed it regardless. Thanks for sharing! :)
I like how this story came full circle to have the MC being the watchman.
10/27/08
I enjoyed reading this heartwarming story. I also liked the surprise of who adopted your MC at the end.