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By Katelyn McNary
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Hebrews 11:7 (NIV)
“By faith Noah, when warned about things not yet seen, in holy fear built an ark to save his family. By his faith he condemned the world and became heir of the righteousness that comes by faith.”
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It would help the reader to put an extra space between paragraphs.
Good analogy and last sentence!
Keep writing!
If you use spacing it will assist the reader in deciphering the rythm of the story. Keep Writing.
Good story overall. Keep it up.