The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
HA! I loved this! Very clever writing. I enjoyed the twist at the end.
09/04/08
Cute! I didn't recognize the real identity of the MC's till the end, which I'm sure, is what you intended. Nicely done!
09/04/08
I loved this piece. I can really see this taking place. Thank you for sharing.
Awesome and hilarious!

Good show!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

09/05/08
Very cute! Very realistic!
09/06/08
LOL! Grown men acting like little boys. :-) Very cute and nicely written!
09/07/08
Very funny story. Make sure you spell the word right - your chicken - should be you're. I loved this. Good job!
09/08/08
I loved it! Very creative....you've got quite the sense of humor. Great job....I wouldn't be surprised if you placed for this one! :)
HAHAHA.. this was great! Fun story, great twist! Very creative.
09/09/08
Okay ... this one was soooo good! I thoroughly enjoyed it from beginning to end. An absolute hoot! Great writing.
09/09/08
Very funny and creative--no other pieces like it this week, as far as I can tell. Well done!
HAH! I love this twisty tale - the ending was awesome. One note - 4th line down: your should be you're (you are).
Super job on the topic. :) Cat