The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/08
This is a really good story for patience. Be sure to double space between paragraphs for easier reading, and it would have made the story even better if you had painted a little more of the scenery, expanding it a bit. Liked the way the boy kept pulling proverbs out of his hat and how he was corrected for his misquotes in the end. Well done!