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Excellent poetry! What a touching picture of our Father's heart. I loved the line, here Him calling, gently calling, Adam where are you. Too many people hide from Him and His love! You captured that beautifully.

I also loved the connection you made between Genesis and people of today. Yes, we all still run from God, and God wants us found. He waits patiently for us to come to Him.

This is very catchy and creative. It can almost be put to song. Very well done. Be blessed.
08/16/08
Very well done. I like the showing of different generations avoiding God. People always think they can run from Him. Good job.