The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/08
Beautiful...and if this is true... Congratulations! It would help to put a space between paragraphs.
Thank you for writing this.
This felt like a true story. It held my interest to the last paragraph. Good job!
Good entry!

I would add an extra space between paragraphs to make it easier to read, though.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

08/14/08
Sweet story with a good lesson. I enjoyed the read.