The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
Very creative! I like the refrain...I like the various meanings it holds.
Thank you for writing this.
08/11/08
I particularly liked this line:
"When your negatives don’t outweigh your positives. Don’t try to balance them. Build a bridge…" ...and, of course, the final line. :)
My favorite line:

"When your education is limited to achieve your dreams. Don’t quit. Build a bridge…"

My entire life, I have felt like I have not received the education I need to have. This made me realize I need to stop feeling sorry for myself and get busy filling the gaps.

Thanks for your entry!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship