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TITLE: The telephone: Friend or Foe. | Previous Challenge Entry
By beatrice Russo
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Let me explain: Does the telephone rings when you are waiting for a call? No.
Does the phone rings when you are sitting doing nothing, or bored and would like to chat with someone, anyone? No.
Does the telephone rings at a respectable time in the evening? Of course not!
In our house the telephone always rings when : I’m in the shower, or I have just sat on the loo or when I have just closed the doors and everything is locked, when I’m coming back from work and rush at the door but miss the call anyway, or when I’m in the back garden or the worst time when the children have finally settled down and start to sleep , or even when it’s the best part in the movie or the soap ( and the other person on the telephone is phoning you to try to sell you some insurance !) and I could go on for hours !
I have come to look at our telephone as my enemy; we live in the same house but don’t like each other.
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I'd love to see this developed even more. Instead of listing examples, pull your reader in with anecdotes. The more humorous the better. Also, work on your formatting by breaking up the story.
Good job.
Well done! Keep writing.