The Official Writing Challenge
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Such memories - which I can't begin to relate to, thank goodness. :) Must have been well-written because it definately left me with an impression of "disturbing". Lots of realistic descriptions. :)
Sad memories reflected on in this entry. Very troubling and bleak. The light of the Savior needs to be invited in to wash away the past of this character. He needs a fresh, clean slate to write new memories upon of a love-filled, Spirit-powered, and hope-filled future.
This was compelling and the character was edgy. I like how you make the reader visualize and even taste the words. Blessings