The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/08
A very moving piece. How little we truly appreciate the difference we can make.
Aww Beckie, that was lovely. It gave me goosebumps when she realised her prayers and witnessing had made a difference. We'll truly never know an influence we've been on people until we reach heaven. Well done.
06/16/08
Oh, Beckie - this was wonderful. Your writing was very evocative, and I could feel the passion throughout. This truly blessed me!
06/16/08
Wow! Beautiful! I'm sure there will be many in heaven we didn't expect, and others that won't be that we expected. This is wonderful. Thank you for writing it.
**THIS SPARKLES**
This is incredible. You really reached out on this. A tissue warning might have been in order as these words are a bit blurry.

I love this and hope to see it place.
06/17/08
Definite tissue alert...

Good writing, great message!
Thank you for this piece.
06/18/08
Wonderfully done. This reminds me of the song, Thank You, but Ray Boltz.
This is a winner, my dear.
What a great story! Kudos!
Okay, where's the tissue alert? This is simply beautiful! I love this kind of reunion, to think of all those people touched-even when we didn't know it. You captured some feeling and emotion with good intensity! I liked it, very well done! ^_^
06/18/08
Great handling of a very moving story. You write very well. Don't get comfortable in Beginners.
06/19/08
Beautiful story...very well done!
This story reminded me of the song by Ray Boltz entitled "Thank You."

I sure hope that when I enter Heaven, that I find out that I had a positive impact on people just like Mary did.

I have a feeling that your long run in beginners will soon be coming to an end. :)
You did it, Beckie! You did it! Congratulations! You are moving up! I KNEW it was going to happen. :)
06/19/08
Congratulations Beckie! A well written story and a well deserved win! By the way, I drove by an accident yesterday, thought of your story and prayed. Thanks for having an impact!
06/19/08
Beckie YAYYYY!!! Outstanding writing, congratulations! Your moving on up! Wooo Hoooo!
06/19/08
Wowzer, Beckie!!! yeah! I'm so happy for you! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And it's up to level two you go! ***Congrats!*** I'm so glad this one made it, awesome writing, girlfriend! ^_^
This is so beautiful, and I can relate to the tissue needs. Also, this is so well written and so real. I especially loved the end.

Keep writing.
07/17/08
Wow to you to! Thanks for your post on my entry. Reading yours, I'm surprised they put mine at one at yours at two instead of the other way around.

Very nice story, well constructed and very encouraging!

Good luck as for the next challenge we both move up to Level 2!