The Official Writing Challenge
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Love your second line in the second verse! It made me smile. This reminds me of a lovely sunday drive. Nice job! ^_^
06/08/08
Made me curious as to whether this was truly your home. It made me visualize the house, as I was reading. I truly enjoyed it and was glad to see it made into a poem!