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Delightful characterization, and an excellent job showing the MC's emotions. Very nicely done!
You did a great job of building the tention to the climax of encountering his aunt. It is a wonderful gift to be able to diffuse someone's anxiety.
Well done I like the way you showed your preconcieved notions of the family were unfounded and you were readily accepted because you brought happiness. Well done keep writing.
A good piece. Wonderful that an in-law aunt adopted you from the start and you became good mates.

Enjoyable, well written and keep giving us this good stuff.
Tender portrayal of this beloved family member. Nicely done. :)
Very well written, I liked Aunt Tootsie.

This is a really wonderful compliment to her of your appreciation.