The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/08
I liked the third story best--the one with the hanky. That one was really different, and worth expanding with dialogue, story-like.
04/19/08
Lovely little memories - I agree that I'd love to see these expanded. Enjoyed this piece.
04/22/08
A lot of room to expand, the story of the candy bar could even be a chapter in a novel. Well written, just needs more.