The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/08
I like this very much--you focused on one aspect of your dad (frugality), but we still got to "know" him through this gentle and loving piece.
04/19/08
Great characterization of your father - and wonderful job with atmosphere. A great read.
LOL your very own drive-in theater... AND a clean bathroom as well. So different to today where kids think they have a right to everything. A lovely story showing family love and contentment. Well done, great story.
04/22/08
Good humor and characterization. Work on mechanics of Challenge paragraphing and you will get a lot more comments. You deserve them, cause you write well.